06/19/25 | The Rehm Copy Newsletter I just read this 5-page sales letter eight times: And there’s one CRUCIAL element that the writer of this sales letter used to promote the product… And it led to this becoming a long-standing control in the golf niche. (In case you don’t know, that means it ran for a long time and made a ton of cash.) This single element has an unreal ability to:
What is this magical element? Well, I just used it on you a few seconds ago. I’m talking about bullet points. Bullet points (also commonly referred to as fascinations in direct response) are bite-sized statements that can be used to build curiosity, promote a product/service, and trigger a response. And while reading this golf sales letter in full eight times over, I came up with a 3-part framework to ensure your bullet points/fascinations do their job. It’s called the MCR framework. M for mechanism. C for curiosity. R for result. To explain these three points, I want you to read these four bullet points from the same sales letter I talked about earlier: If you analyze each of these bullets, you’ll see that they have all three of those things — mechanism, curiosity, and a result. And the crazy part about bullet points is that they aren’t just for written sales letters. They can be implemented in video format as well. All the greats of DR talk about how bullet points are a fundamental skill to develop… And it makes sense — you’ve probably bought something because of a great bullet point without even realizing it. Adam
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06/24/25 | The Rehm Copy Newsletter I was comparing some of our clients to some of the accounts I'm auditing right now in terms of abandoned cart performance... And I noticed something interesting. The brands using the "standard" 3-email abandoned cart sequence were leaving serious money on the table. You know the standard flow: Email 1: "You forgot something!" Email 2: "Still thinking it over?" Email 3: "Last chance + 10% off" It works. But it's not optimized for 2025 buyer behavior. In...
06/23/25 | The Rehm Copy Newsletter Short one today, but it's on my mind and I think it's important. Everyone's always looking for the next "unique mechanism" or some crazy new marketing strategy. But marketing really comes down to just a few core things: running ads, creating good pages to send traffic to, sending emails and texts to your list, and maybe some content creation or partnerships. That's it. There's not a whole lot of uniqueness outside of just doing these basics really well. For...
06/22/25 | The Rehm Copy Newsletter I've been auditing a lot of Klaviyo accounts lately and I'm seeing the same mistakes over and over again… So today I'm just going to tell you each of the ones that are top of mind for me so you can avoid these in your emails. These are not high level mindset changes either -- they are real tangible changes you can make right away. Mistake 1: Category headers at the top of emails Those little navigation menus distract from your actual message. Move them to...